Why Not Me

Category: Writers Block

Post 1 by mouse6687 (I am #1) on Tuesday, 27-Jan-2009 10:09:12

My life is in shambles
My heart is a mess
My feelings are totally wrecked
My mind is scrambled
Fucked beyond repair
It's never "me"
It's always "you"
That's an extremely lame excuse
Not knowing what went wrong
Left behind while your world carries on
Grandeur for you
Hurt feelings for me
My life has moved on but not really
Happiness when you're in pain
Pain when you're happy
Greedy as any
Selfish more than some
My life carries on
Theirs always seems better
Wondering why I care when they're not even here
Guards up
Barriers held strong
Strong and Stable as titanium
Soft and Beautiful as gold
What makes me so different than them

Post 2 by Sword of Sapphire (Whether you agree with my opinion or not, you're still gonna read it!) on Tuesday, 27-Jan-2009 22:47:49

Very deep. Nice use of similes.

Post 3 by soaring eagle (flying high again!) on Wednesday, 28-Jan-2009 8:25:59

Oh I can relate to this foresure

Post 4 by cumbiambera2005 (i just keep on posting!) on Wednesday, 28-Jan-2009 12:17:12

This really says a lot.

Post 5 by Elenhiia (Feather'rr'rr'rr'rr'rr'rr'rr'rr'rr'rr for president!) on Wednesday, 25-Feb-2009 14:19:43

Oh it's pretty. I heard you reading some of your writing on the pipeline.

Post 6 by Jo Friday (Account disabled) on Wednesday, 25-Feb-2009 14:34:32

Maybe you can try and chew bubble gum and walk a straight line.